"To Marty’s relief, the snow went north the way it
sometimes did in early autumn. But after another sleepless night waiting for
Jenny’s fever to break, she felt ready to drop. When the fever finally did
leave, the child fell into a deep sleep. Wrapped in a quilt, Marty curled into
her cricket rocker and dozed off. In the late afternoon someone knocked at the
door. To her surprise, Dr. Brady waited on the cabin’s front porch, the collar
of his flannel-lined denim jacket turned up against the wind that whistled
through the lodge pole pines.
Marty quickly pulled open the door and let him in.
“Dr. Brady, are you lost?”
He shook off the cold and set down his black medical
bag.
“Isn’t this Shadow Mountain?”
“Yes, of course, but why are you here?” Was Jenny’s
illness more serious than he’d let on?
He glanced around the cabin, his perusal taking in
the simple but cozy surroundings. His gaze rested on the piles of colorful
quilt squares piled next to Marty’s sewing machine, then drifted to the sofa
where Jenny slept snugly wrapped in the pink and turquoise quilt Marty had made
when she’d first brought her niece home with her.
“How is she doing today? Did the fever break this
morning?”
Marty set aside the quilt from around her shoulders and
went to Jenny’s side. The doctor followed.
“Yes. How did you know?”
“It’s just the way this particular bug has been
working on kids.” He felt the child’s forehead, then took out his stethoscope,
warming the diaphragm before listening to her breathing through it. Jenny never
stirred, and it was a relief to see her resting so much easier than the past
few days.
“Lungs sound clear. She’s sleeping well. I’d say
Jenny is on the mend. She’ll probably wake up famished. You’re an excellent
guardian, Ms. Cutter.”
He turned and gave her that charming smile. The
effect sent a zing shooting along Marty’s backbone and her knees went weak. For
a moment she wavered, and then the doctor took her by the arm and led her to
the rocker, pushing her gently to sit.
“Okay, open up.” He flicked on his flashlight and
peered down her throat, touched a light hand to her forehead. “Are you feeling
ill? No nonsense now.”
“It’s only that I haven’t slept well since Jenny’s
been sick. Seriously, I’m all right, just tired.”
“Then it’s time you had a break. Doctor’s orders.
Just tell me where you keep your coffee. I could use a good strong cup myself.”
He shrugged off his jacket and hung it by the door.
“Sorry.” Marty said. “I don’t drink it. All I have
is hot chocolate and herbal tea.”
He took the news with admirable stoicism. “Well,
guess that will just have to do. I’ll make the best of it.”
He put up the tea kettle. Marty admitted to
herself that it felt good to sit here and let someone else make the tea. She
watched Dr. Brady move about the alcove of a kitchen. He was tall and lean,
with a rangy look to him. Crinkle lines etched the corners of his eyes.
Definitely a man who spent a good deal of time outdoors."From Autumn's Gold: A Patchwork Autumn
Tomorrow, look for an excerpt from October Spell.
6 comments:
The good doctor sounds like he wants to stay a while! Lovely excerpt. Best wishes on book sales!
You bet he's there to stay a while. Best of luck on the new release. Yum!
He can make a house call at my house any time. :) Nice excerpt, Lucy. Best wishes.
This is great, Lucy! I especially like the line about the wind whistling through the lodgepole pines. Sets the scene so well. :)
Thanks for all the nice comments. I rather like Dr. Brady myself!
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